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PostSubject: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:09 am

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:16 pm

Name: Sacred Testament
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Package: Support
Desc: A Sacred power once lost within passage of time, only to reawaken within the Vessel of the Divine being Noah. The power it holds can bring forth either Salvation or Destruction at the whim of the user, even when not used to it's greatest potential due to the assorted spells it allows the vessel to create with nothing but their imagination. A Power once used to cast off evil and protect the innocent.
Effect: Required basis of all "Support" Techs
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500
SP: 25
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:31 am

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:09 pm


Noah Valesti
Redemption Form



Name: Final Testament " Redemption "
Transformation Slots: 2+3 (5)
Desc: Thanks to the Woman of his life Kimi, Noah had been able to do something that could only be done once his heart and emotional drive reached it's highest level. Regaining what is truly means to be a Kami, Noah gains a power allowing him to do what his old powers had not. The Form initiates with a red lining which outlines his body in various way, though the lining and markings aren't on his body as it's inches away from it. At this time his body and physical capabilities are enhanced, though the actual transformation isn't finished. His actual body then changes in an instant into a completely different form, no longer possessing the markings or linings, but maintaining a slight red glow. The form consist of a white body not of exactly flesh, His limbs appear detached from each other, though they act in a manner of his normal body, not allowing things to be done that his body wouldn't be able to do *Meaning, that even if someone slashes through the opened space where something should be (Proportionate to his current form) He would still recieve damage in the manner he would if that area was struck while in the normal form* . He Possess no feet and his hands act as claws, being able to slash like blades If he possess the " Blade Package ". The final and best piece would be the eight swords aligning his back which act in the manner of wings *His Ability to Fly Manifest in Physical form* and can't do anything else unless granted by the " Energy Package ".
Example of the Description 1:46-2:15
Effects: Refreshing + Booster II [Str:2 | Int:2 | Def:3 | Aegis:2 | Dex:3] ||
Properties:
» Morph: Description
» Glow: Description
» Trans Merger: Sacred Testament " Refreshing " + Sacred Testament " Booster II "
» Hasten: Instant
» No Change: Hasten Doesn't occur
Level Req: 30
EXP Cost: 24,500



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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:28 am

transformation's can only have the effects listed on the page
there are reasons for this
I really just need the transformation name and what tags it has kinda like

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Name: Final Testament " Redemption "
Transformation Slots: 2+3 (5)
Effects: Refreshing + Booster II [Str:2 | Int:2 | Def:3 | Aegis:2 | Dex:3]
Properties:
» Morph: Description
» Glow: Description
» Trans Merger: Sacred Testament " Refreshing " + Sacred Testament " Booster II "
» Hasten: Instant
Level Req: 30
EXP Cost: 24,000

I dun really mean for transformations to have descriptions added to them b/c then that adds passive effects that aren’t supported by the site.

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Thanks to the Woman of his life Kimi, Noah had been able to do something that could only be done once his heart and emotional drive reached it's highest level. Regaining what is truly means to be a Kami, Noah gains a power allowing him to do what his old powers had not.
(something short like this is fine)

The Form initiates with a red lining which outlines his body in various way, though the lining and markings aren't on his body as it's inches away from it. At this time his body and physical capabilities are enhanced, though the actual transformation isn't finished. His actual body then changes in an instant into a completely different form, no longer possessing the markings or linings, but maintaining a slight red glow.
(This actually both includes and counters the hasten tag. So it allows you to have it and not have it at the same time. Not a big deal but I dun wanna get into optional effects. I’d rather it either always do something or not. Could probably add a “no change” effect as well, so you can choose one or the other.)

The form consist of a white body not of flesh, and the limbs appear detached from each other, though they act in a manner of his normal body, not allowing things to be done that his body wouldn't be able to do unless through abilities granted through packages.
(morph is supposed to mimic a creature. The diff between a creature and a thing are critical points. So basically w/ur description you’ve just negated all of your critical points. I won’t mind changing into this particular form as long as your mortality is maintained and compensated for. i.e ur neck is still where your neck would be, etc. not sure about the “disconnection” of your body. Seems like it’d make it easy to dodge things like swords by allowing them to pass thru u)

He Possess no feet and his hands act as claws, being able to slash like blades Via " Blade Package " The final and best piece would be the eight swords aligning his back which act in the manner of wings *His Ability to Fly Manifest in Physical form* and can't do anything else unless granted by the " Energy Package ".
(Unsupported effected of morph)

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 06, 2012 3:50 am


Noah Valesti
Redemption Form



Name: Sacred Testament " Rebirth "
Transformation Slots: 2
Desc: The First sign of Noah regaining his power....The Form initiates with a red lining which outlines his body in various way, though the lining and markings aren't on his body as it's inches away from it At this time his body has shifted internally in the way it works by allowing energy to be processed more effectively, essentially cutting down the required Stamina needed for casting spells or fighting in general by half. Even though it's presented in a different manner, it is the power his past transformation produced.
Example of the Description 1:46-2:15
Effects: Refreshing
Properties:
» Category I: Hasten
» Category II: No Change
» Category III: Glow
Level Req: 15
EXP Cost: 10,000

»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»

Name: Sacred Testament " Reminisce "
Transformation Slots: 3
Desc: Unlike "Rebirth" This form of which Noah can access is completely different than the one of the past in both process and abilities. His actual body then changes in an instant into a completely different form, no longer possessing the markings or linings, but maintaining a slight red glow. The form consist of a white body not of exactly flesh, His limbs appear detached from each other, though they act in a manner of his normal body, not allowing things to be done that his body wouldn't be able to do *Meaning, that even if someone slashes through the opened space where something should be (Proportionate to his current form) He would still recieve damage in the manner he would if that area was struck while in the normal form* . He Possess no feet and his hands act as claws, being able to slash like blades If he possess the " Blade Package ". The final and best piece would be the eight swords aligning his back like a Cape, which act in the manner of wings *His Ability to Fly Manifest in Physical form* and can't do anything else unless granted by the " Energy Package ".
Example of the Description 1:46-2:15
Effects: Booster II [Str:2 | Int:2 | Def:3 | Aegis:2 | Dex:3]
Properties:
» Category I: Hasten | Transmerger
» Category II: Pressure
» Category III: Glow | Morph
Level Req: 30
EXP Cost: 10,500

»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»»

Name: Final Testament " Redemption "
Transformation Slots: 2+3 (5)
Desc: Sacred Testament " Rebirth " + Sacred Testament " Reminisce "
Effects: Refreshing + Booster II [Str:2 | Int:2 | Def:3 | Aegis:2 | Dex:3]


Edited the Transformation and made clear on what may have been misunderstandings. Even though his body looks detached and nothing in between, striking in said open space would damage him as it would normally his body lol. And those things mentioned at the end isn't supported by Morph lol They are supported by the Packages/Techs ( He is a Kami and there for normally able to fly.)

Basically it sets it up for when I make techs, I'll also have to give a minor explination how it would be used in that form as well, like
ScatterShot: Noah launch eight beams from his fingers. When in his Redemption form, The swords spreads out and launch eight beams from the Tip
Or
Slash: Noah slashes with some kind of blade. When in that form, He can slash using his claws etc x
without the packages and techniques including them, they are nothing but his form




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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 06, 2012 5:35 am

Name: Life-Stream
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Package: Energy
Desc: Becoming more in-tuned with things around him including the land, Noah has found access to a new power once not available to him. The Kami can now draw forth various types of energy and utilize them in various forms even when in a different form himself.
Effect: Required basis of all "Energy" Techs
Training Req: Trained: 500 | Honed: 1000 | Mastered: 1500 | Perfected: 2000
SP: 25

Name: Last Resort
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Package: Bladed
Desc: Having his divine powers stripped from him, the Kami had found himself forced to take up the way of the sword in order to be able defend himself as well as protect the ones he love. This help enhance his physical fighting capabilities Normal and within his Transformations.
Effect: Required basis of all "Bladed" Techs
Training Req: Trained: 500 | Honed: 1000 | Mastered: 1500 | Perfected: 2000
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 06, 2012 5:41 am

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:47 am

Name: Revive
(HP+1)(MDE1)(REG1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of bringing those considered "The Damned" from the brink of death. Noah will bring his hands over what ever needs to be healed, or point in the direction of the individual. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and heal them while regenerating of the body occurs which is displayed by red lightning errupting from the wound and sealing/reconstructing it. Noah is able to regenerate organs, and other important parts like bones and limbs. Even after the Sealing/Reconstructing is complete, the body continues to heal.
Effect: +10HP | 1/2 Roll Duration | 5% of Body Mass
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Refresh
(STA+1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing those who have pushed their limits in battle or even daily activities. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and restore their Stamina over a period of time.
Effect: +10STA | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 563 | Honed: 1125 | Mastered: 1688 | Perfected: 2250 [Final: 5626]
SP: 50

Name: Restore All
(HP+1)(STA+1)(MLT1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing multiple individuals who have pushed their limits in battle as well as Heal wounds produced by various forms of attacks at the same time. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of all the individuals and restore a portion of their Stamina and HP at once.
Effect: +10HP | +10STA | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Overdrive
(BST+1)(MLT1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Increasing multiple individuals physical and magical capabilties. At the lowest level, when casted, the magic flow to the individuals and when it comes in contact, flows through the body and enhance their reaction speed to things, and eventually on a higher level will increase their physical attack power, magical attack power, physical defense, magical defense and overall speed for a period of time.
Effect: +1Dex | 2 Targets | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Clarity
(BND-1*Mental*)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of freeing individuals from Binds induced on the mind. Upon realizing they are in a bind, the Magic will endow the Individual's Mental capabilites with greater strength to break themselves out of the binds.
Effect: +0 Influence Breaking
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25

Name: Seeker
(DMG1)(HNE1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy within his eyes which collects until unleashed. When unleashed, narrow beams will shoot from the eyes and make their way over towards it's target. If the opponent evades the attack, the beams will continue to follow them in a sharp manner until it has made contact with them or something else that possess density.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 50

Name: Jihad
(DMG1)(HNE1)(QCK1)(PEN1)(MLT1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy that can bring great destruction to those targeted by him. Noah having this spell would channel the magic from his arms and into his finger tips, in which once complete would launch multiple blue beams of energy towards his opponents, being able to control the beams to hone in on the opponent. The beams themselves move at an increased speed than that of Normal Magic, and are capable of piercing things resistant against Energy. When honing in on the target, when the Target evades, the beams move to the exact spot they were at, and then make a sharp turn to the opponents current position. When in his Redemption form, the eight swords on his back spread out and the energy is channeled and unleashed from the tips.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing | +0 Spell Movement | -1 Resist | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 1500 | Honed: 3000 | Mastered: 4500 | Perfected: 6000 [Final: 15000]
SP: 125
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:48 am

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Name: Revive
(HP+1)(MDE1)(REG1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of bringing those considered "The Damned" from the brink of death. Noah will bring his hands over what ever needs to be healed, or point in the direction of the individual. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and heal them while regenerating of the body occurs which is displayed by red lightning errupting from the wound and sealing/reconstructing it. Noah is able to regenerate organs, and other important parts like bones and limbs. Even after the Sealing/Reconstructing is complete, the body continues to heal.
Effect: +10HP | 1/2 Roll Duration | 5% of Body Mass
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Comments: One issue, though might be a bit off. Currently the WoE has no registered " revive" effect. Whilst HP+ did cover this on the last update. Currently its description is as follows.
"Notes: This can target self or others. It restores health to a character."
The difference between the two seems to be now that the update is done this is the only one limited to the support package and bolsters a higher rate of restoration. Unlike before tho it doesn't say whether or not it can be used to revive. I'd consult the Shindows updates about this one.


Name: Refresh
(STA+1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing those who have pushed their limits in battle or even daily activities. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and restore their Stamina over a period of time.
Effect: +10STA | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 563 | Honed: 1125 | Mastered: 1688 | Perfected: 2250 [Final: 5626]
SP: 50
Comments: Seems fine

Name: Restore All
(HP+1)(STA+1)(MLT1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing multiple individuals who have pushed their limits in battle as well as Heal wounds produced by various forms of attacks at the same time. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of all the individuals and restore a portion of their Stamina and HP at once.
Effect: +10HP | +10STA | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75
Comments: Seems fine

Name: Overdrive
(BST+1)(MLT1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Increasing multiple individuals physical and magical capabilties. At the lowest level, when casted, the magic flow to the individuals and when it comes in contact, flows through the body and enhance their reaction speed to things, and eventually on a higher level will increase their physical attack power, magical attack power, physical defense, magical defense and overall speed for a period of time.
Effect: +1Dex | 2 Targets | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75
Comments: Seems fine, but I'd make sure its noted that it doesn't effect the user


Name: Clarity
(BND-1*Mental*)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of freeing individuals from Binds induced on the mind. Upon realizing they are in a bind, the Magic will endow the Individual's Mental capabilites with greater strength to break themselves out of the binds.
Effect: +0 Influence Breaking
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25
Comments: Seems fine, even tho atm the description isn't accurate. Altho I assume you'll be upgrading it.


Name: Seeker
(DMG1)(HNE1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy within his eyes which collects until unleashed. When unleashed, narrow beams will shoot from the eyes and make their way over towards it's target. If the opponent evades the attack, the beams will continue to follow them in a sharp manner until it has made contact with them or something else that possess density.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 50
Comments: This is like above, only that atm the description is actually important. As it stands it will not continue to follow them. It will for one turn till upgraded.


Name: Jihad
(DMG1)(HNE1)(QCK1)(PEN1)(MLT1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy that can bring great destruction to those targeted by him. Noah having this spell would channel the magic from his arms and into his finger tips, in which once complete would launch multiple blue beams of energy towards his opponents, being able to control the beams to hone in on the opponent. The beams themselves move at an increased speed than that of Normal Magic, and are capable of piercing things resistant against Energy. When honing in on the target, when the Target evades, the beams move to the exact spot they were at, and then make a sharp turn to the opponents current position. When in his Redemption form, the eight swords on his back spread out and the energy is channeled and unleashed from the tips.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing | +0 Spell Movement | -1 Resist | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 1500 | Honed: 3000 | Mastered: 4500 | Perfected: 6000 [Final: 15000]
SP: 125

Comments: Again assuming it'll be upgraded on the spell speed. I'd remove the flashy redemption form description tho. Note "When in his Redemption form, the eight swords on his back spread out and the energy is channeled and unleashed from the tips. If theres eight swords and it fires from the tips, thats eight beams". You'd need something else to cover that.



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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Thu Jan 12, 2012 5:19 am

Name: Revive
(HP+1)(MDE1)(REG1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of bringing those considered a lost cause from critical conditions that would normally result in death. Noah will bring his hands over what ever needs to be healed, or point in the direction of the individual. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and heal them while regenerating of the body occurs which is displayed by red lightning errupting from the wound and sealing/reconstructing it. Noah is able to regenerate organs, and other important parts like bones and limbs. Even after the Sealing/Reconstructing is complete, the body continues to heal.
Effect: +10HP | 1/2 Roll Duration | 5% of Body Mass
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Refresh
(STA+1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing those who have pushed their limits in battle or even daily activities. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of the individual and restore their Stamina over a period of time.
Effect: +10STA | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 563 | Honed: 1125 | Mastered: 1688 | Perfected: 2250 [Final: 5626]
SP: 50

Name: Restore All
(HP+1)(STA+1)(MLT1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Revitalizing multiple individuals who have pushed their limits in battle as well as Heal wounds produced by various forms of attacks at the same time. When the Magic make contact, it will flow through the entire body of all the individuals and restore a portion of their Stamina and HP at once.
Effect: +10HP | +10STA | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Overdrive
(BST+1)(MLT1)(MDE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of Increasing multiple individuals excluding the user's physical and magical capabilties. At the lowest level, when casted, the magic flow to the individuals and when it comes in contact, flows through the body and enhance their reaction speed to things, and eventually on a higher level will increase their physical attack power, magical attack power, physical defense, magical defense and overall speed for a period of time.
Effect: +1Dex | 2 Targets | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 75

Name: Clarity
(BND-1*Mental*)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of freeing individuals from Binds induced on the mind. Upon realizing they are in a bind, the Magic will endow the Individual's Mental capabilites with greater strength to break themselves out of the binds.
Effect: +0 Influence Breaking
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25

Name: Seeker
(DMG1)(HNE1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy within his eyes which collects until unleashed. When unleashed, narrow beams will shoot from the eyes and make their way over towards it's target. If the opponent evades the attack, the beams will continue to follow them in a sharp manner for a certain period until it has made contact with them, something else that possess density, or time runs out.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 50

Name: Jihad
(DMG1)(HNE1)(QCK1)(PEN1)(MLT1)
Package: Energy
Desc: Pulling from the Life-stream, Noah generate energy that can bring great destruction to those targeted by him. Noah having this spell would channel the magic from his arms and into his finger tips, in which once complete would launch multiple blue beams of energy towards his opponents, being able to control the beams to hone in on the opponent. The beams themselves move at an increased speed than that of Normal Magic, and are capable of piercing things resistant against Energy. When honing in on the target, when the Target evades, the beams move to the exact spot they were at, and then make a sharp turn to the opponents current position. When in his Redemption form, the eight swords on his back spread out and the energy is channeled and unleashed from the tips. sometimes multiple beams will shoot from each tip, or if not trained, only the number of beams allowed will be fired.
Effect: +0INT | 1 Post Honing | +0 Spell Movement | -1 Resist | 2 Targets
Training Req: Trained: 1500 | Honed: 3000 | Mastered: 4500 | Perfected: 6000 [Final: 15000]
SP: 125
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:03 pm

should be ok pending mlc confirmation

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:30 pm

Name: Soundproof
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Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability negate sounds produced by the userfor a period of time. There are several basic approaches to reducing sound, this technique using a magical layer to reflect or absorb the energy of the sound waves. This Magical layer covering him will absorb sound waves produced by the body, though not every single wave, making it to where someone with enhanced hearing would be able to pick up on it.
Effect: HRG Reduction | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 563 | Honed: 1125 | Mastered: 1688 | Perfected: 2250 [Final: 5626]
SP: 50

Name: Rebirth
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Package: Support
Desc: Noah have had very rare moments back in the past where his ability would initiate without having to chant, which had saved his life on many occasions. Upon actually becoming one with the Sacred Testament, the spell " Revive " Initiates immediately upon the Kami receiving any form of damage. If the damage produces a wound then like the Technique "Revive" regenerating of the body occurs which is displayed by red lightning errupting from the wound and sealing/reconstructing it. This assists him in situations like getting shot to the head, where in normal cases he wouldn't be able to get the chant off to perform the skill.
*Example: @0:14-0:21 and @1:41-1:55*
Effect: Initiates " Revive [HP+|MDE|REG] " upon " Taking a Hit "
Training Req: Trained: 750 | Honed: 1500 | Mastered: 2250 | Perfected: 3000 [Final: 7500]
SP: 250
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Jan 17, 2012 9:47 pm

should be fine
start makin chants for your spells like others are doin too

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:36 am

Chants added to the First post to all Magical related skills
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Thu Jan 19, 2012 7:33 pm

Name: Slash
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Package: Blade
Desc: Utilizing a some kind of blade weaponry, Noah will perform a normal slash towards his opponent. When within his Redemption form, the slash is performed with his claws.
Effect: +0STR
Training Req: Trained: 500 | Honed: 1000 | Mastered: 1500 | Perfected: 2000 [Final: 5000]
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:51 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Thu Feb 02, 2012 1:51 pm

Name: Youthful Spirit
(SYL1)
Package: Movement
Desc: A form of utilizing the child body of the Kami to the best of it's abilities to perform quickly. Noah takes advantage that the body possess less weight than that of an adult body which would allow greater flexibility of the body to evade attacks and strike opponents quickly. Combining that with the the size of the body will make it somewhat difficult for opponents to battle him.
Effect: Required basis of all "Movement" Techs
Training Req: Trained: 500 | Honed: 1000 | Mastered: 1500 | Perfected: 2000 [Final: 5000]
SP: 25

Name: Haste
(MOB2)(MDE1)
Package: Movement
Desc: A Technique utilizing the swiftness and awareness of the Kami in order to react to things faster than he normally would. Once in battle, The Kami would initiate this technique which temporarily allows him to perform quickly in a physical manner than he could before, increasing reaction and physical attack speed.
Effect: +1Dex | 1/2 Roll Duration
Training Req: Trained: 1000 | Honed: 2000 | Mastered: 3000 | Perfected: 4000 [Final: 10,000]
SP: 100

Name: Foresight
(QUE2)(DLY2)
Package: Support
Desc: An Passive ability granted from gaining advanced knowledge of the Sacred Testament. Based off various things that occurs before a situation, The Kami known as Noah would prepare various spells as counter-measures just in case the scenario actually occurs. With the spells prepared, all he has to do is release them when the time they are needed. The techniques are then released in a rapid succession.
Chant: I don't like where this is heading.
Effect: 2 Techniques | Up to 2 Posts
Training Req: Trained: 844 | Honed: 1688 | Mastered: 2644 | Perfected: 3375 [Final: 8,551]
SP: 150

Name: Empathy
(COM2)
Package: Support
Desc: An Passive ability granted from gaining advanced knowledge of the Sacred Testament, The Kami now possess the power of understanding and imaginatively entering into the feelings, thoughts, or attitudes of another person within a certain range, as well as allowing them to feel his, and thus effectively communicating between one another without the use of words.
Chant: Listen with your Heart!
Effect: 25 Yards
Training Req: Trained: 563 | Honed: 1125 | Mastered: 1688 | Perfected: 2250 [Final: 5,626]
SP: 75

Name: Resentment
(MDE3)(HND2)(AOE1)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of weakening those around him, friends or foe. Though underestimated due to his appearance, the Kami always striked fear into his enemies. The Evil Scheming grin coupled with his blood colored eyes make him out to be something people see in nightmares. This abilities utilizes that same evil feel when he is in battle or resents someone, in which collecting it, it would spread the feel out within a circular range in yards for a period of time causing those even with the greatest of will powers to lose faith, causing a hinderance in their physical capabilities.
Chant: You dare insult me you inferior little pest?
Effect: Roll Duration| -1 Str/Dex | 5 Yards
Training Req: Trained: 1219 | Honed: 2438 | Mastered: 3769 | Perfected: 4875 [Final: 12301]
SP: 350
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Fri Feb 03, 2012 9:26 am

Youthful Spirit:
 
Youthful Spirit: Light Vote approved as "revised"
Haste: Light Vote Approved

Foresight: This seems like it should apply more for CND as you are stating "just in case the scenario actually occurs" that's kind of the basis for CND. Imo, this ability seems like an attempt to have a blanket CND ability that pretty much works in any condition that you can foresee up to 2 turns in advance. I'll let Penny or Kyro weigh in on this to see if I'm off.

Empathy:
 
Revised the wording, b/c emotion-based does not allow access to thoughts. You're feeling their "heart" not their mind, that would be psionics. Also, removed "entering" b/c that seems to imply that you might be able to manipulate those emotions.
Empath: Light Vote approved as revised

Resentment:
 
* Removed the "makes him appear to be a nightmare" part b/c that would be an illusion or SHP. Also removed the bit about "even those with the greatest of will" as that implies more than what this ability does.
Resentment: Light Vote Approved as revised

An overall piece of advice, be mindful of your wording. I figure the wording is just being descriptive for you, but in your abilities, I've found several potential misconceptions of what your ability can do or how it will work. The effects tend to be very straightforward about which effect can do what, so I'd simply like to avoid confusion for future encounters. You might wanna PM Penny to ask him to look these over since you need a Dark Vote on these now.

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sat Feb 04, 2012 9:43 pm

@Foresight: It is not an attempt at that. CND once utilized will trigger the spell automatically only when the condition specifically is met (Which the condition itself must be mentioned in the tech). This is chanting all the spells, and then releasing them all in rapid succession when ever he wants or feel the need to within a 2 post period. After the Two Posts the spells would unleash whether he likes it or not.

QUE: Lets the user pre chant several spells in order to release them in rapid succession. This all has to be done at once unless it's combined with a DLY tag or something similar.

The Idea I get from this is basically the Battle System on FF13 lol where you select the skills you're going to use, and then when the action Gauge is full (Or in this case The Posts Dictated by DLY) Then all the skills unleashes With the exception that They can be unleashed before the point where they are forcibly unleashed. The Just incase scenario thing is simply a way of explaining why he would use such a tech, like He feels like performing a specific action will cause injury to him so just in case, he Ques his healing spell along with something else, or feels like a battle is about to engage due to so and so stepping up and attacking his guard so he Ques an attack spell along with another attack spell .

@Advice: Understood. I will try to be more mindful as you're right, it is or appear as just providing a descriptive tech to me lol
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:36 pm

Youthful Spirit: Dark vote Accepted Revised
Haste: Dark vote accepted Revised
Foresight: Disapproving for a different reason than Kaz. Foresight, and just in case that scenario occurs. Indicates to me that this tech supposedly gives him a glimpse into the future. Even if its in a what if scenario, it does invite the option of Metagaming. So I'd advise you just remove all about the foresight and just go with. " It makes him able to channel spells in advance". Cause really. What kind of mage wouldn't want to do that?
Empath: Dark Vote, Accepted revised
Resentment: Dark vote, accepted revised.


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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:49 pm

Name: Proactive
(QUE2)(DLY2)
Package: Support
Desc: An Passive ability granted from gaining advanced knowledge of the Sacred Testament. Noah is now able to channel skills in advanced and hold them for a period of time before releasing them. With the spells prepared, all he has to do is release them when the time they are needed in which the techniques are then released in a rapid succession in the order that they were originally chanted. If they are not utilized within a certain time then they trigger whether he wants them to or not.
Chant: I don't like where this is heading.
Effect: 2 Techniques | Up to 2 Posts
Training Req: Trained: 844 | Honed: 1688 | Mastered: 2644 | Perfected: 3375 [Final: 8,551]
SP: 150
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:56 pm


Dark Vote, Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Feb 07, 2012 4:41 am

Proactive: Light Vote approved. (Must find a cool picture to use too >_<)

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:25 am

Name: Breakthrough
(BND-1*Physical*)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of freeing individuals from Binds induced other individuals. His body become fueled by whatever emotion he is feeling at the time, and upon unleashing that emotion through Magic, he is able to force his way out of a bind
Chant: Get Off!
Effect: +0 Bind Breaking
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25


Name: Purifier
(BND-1*M.Physical*)
Package: Support
Desc: A Spell from the Sacred Testament, having been an ability capable of freeing individuals from Binds induced by Magic. Noah's Body or the individual this spell is used on become infused with this special power in which purifies and break down the magic that is physically binding them.
Chant: Disperse!
Effect: +0 Bind Breaking
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25


Name: Emotional Drive
(CND1)
Package: Support
Desc: The Power of the Sacred Testament infuses with one of the strongest feelings that Noah could have, Love. The mere mention of Kimi's name is enough to produce this spell as it then remains in his heart until the situation calls for it's initiation. When the condition of this spell is met, when caught in a Mental bind, even when not aware of it, His heart will call out to Kimi, endowing him with an emotional drive to which triggers Clarity.
Chant: Kimi
Effect: Initiates " Clarity [BND-] " upon " being bound "
Training Req: Trained: 375 | Honed: 750 | Mastered: 1125 | Perfected: 1500 [Final: 3750]
SP: 25
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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:06 am

Light sanctioned.

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:34 am

1, Dark Approved
2, Dark Approved
3, Denied: Reasoning,
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when caught in a Mental bind, even when not aware of it
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As an active tech, a character should be aware they're in a bind before using a bind breaking technique
Whilst I realise this is a conditional tech which triggers the bind breaking tech. Upon attempted activation. The sites own systems would allow your opponent to contest your bind break since Noah is technically still unaware of the bind in question. I'd refer this tech to Shin for final judgement.

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PostSubject: Re: Scriptures of Noah   Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:17 am

#3 prior approval review - Agreed; I originally missed with BND- was being referred to. I would suggest implementing an addition of SSN tag to be utilized to sense foreign magic within your body to gain knowledge that you're in a bind or something to that extent.

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